Omaru creek Animation

Omaru Creek paragraph

Name: Limi 6 April 2017

In class we were learning how to write a paragraph. I based my paragraph on the omaru creek

Omaru creek is getting dirtier and dirtier. Recently a group of men went to the creek to clear the pipes, because it was clogged up with rubbish. Schools had gathered by the stream only to see rubbish floating in the creek. They have also seen the colour of the stream, from water as clear as the sky on a sunny day, to the colour of the sewers in New York city. They have also come in contact with the creek’s dreadful odour, it smells like animals use the creek for its dumping ground. Now when you walk over to see the creek you will see nothing but a polluted stream.

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The river talks

My results for e-asttle

Name: Limi 15 February 2017

This is my math results for my E-asttle test. I got a 4P the last time I did my test, which was at the beginning of this year. The next time I take the test I will strive to get a 4A or 5B.

This is my reading results I got a 4B at the beginning of this year. I think I did good but I could do better, so the next time I do the test I’ll give it all I got and try get 4A or 4P.

Fractions,percentage and decimals

Things I cant live without

In class today we made a wheel with all the things that I cant live without, and this is what I came up with.

movies - it entertains me when Im down or bored.

family - because they've been apart of me since I was born.

food - eating is one of my hobbies when I'm bored I eat when im sad I eat and when i'm hungry I eat.

music - music is a really important part of me because it's like I enter into another dimension it makes me feel free.

friends - my friends are the best things that ever happened to me I don't think I would be who I am now if it wasn't for them.

Chocolate

This chocolate is as smooth as a metal pole holding up the flag, it’s more delicious than a ice cream on a hot summer day. Its scent is as sweet as a baby's smile.