This chocolate is as smooth as a metal pole holding up the flag, it’s more delicious than a ice cream on a hot summer day. Its scent is as sweet as a baby's smile.
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Hello Limi When I read your paragraph I thought you described it amazingly and I would want to eat it.I read it again and I found three of the five senses which were feel, smell, and taste.What would you do if all of it cam true?
I'm Mark, a teacher working for the Summer Learning Journey you signed up for at the end of school. I was just checking on everyone to see if they had started yet and I came across this AWESOME poem.
I hope at some point you join in on our journey, as I think you would enjoy it quite a bit. We are learning about other countries and there are plenty of different kinds of activities, including some poetry ones!
This chocolate is as smooth as a metal pole holding up the flag, it’s more delicious than a ice cream on a hot summer day. Its scent is as sweet as a baby's smile.
2 comments:
Hello Limi
When I read your paragraph I thought you described it amazingly and I would want to eat it.I read it again and I found three of the five senses which were feel, smell, and taste.What would you do if all of it cam true?
Kia ora Limiteti,
I'm Mark, a teacher working for the Summer Learning Journey you signed up for at the end of school. I was just checking on everyone to see if they had started yet and I came across this AWESOME poem.
I hope at some point you join in on our journey, as I think you would enjoy it quite a bit. We are learning about other countries and there are plenty of different kinds of activities, including some poetry ones!
Take care and enjoy your holidays!
Mark
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