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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 26 May 2017

Letter to the principal

Name: Limi 18 May 2017

Dear Mr Hendricks.

Today I am writing this letter to inform you about why I should be one of your helpers. I know that you have a variety of pupils to select from, but I think that you should really consider choosing me. I know that I am capable of being a wonderful and trustful helper. I am a good communicator and I like to help those in need. As I teach others to be responsible, good and helpful, I might be able to learn some more things that benefit to my needs. So while I help others to learn I can learn too. So if you give me this task to do I promise to complete it with the best of my abilities. I really hope you think hard on choosing me and If you do I think you're doing the right thing.

Yours sincerely:

Limi


( I wrote this letter for our principal, who came around our classes asking for people to be a helper. A helper was meant to help certain people who were selected by him and another man. there were only 5 spaces for the job, but if you wanted to get chosen you had to write a paragraph. This paragraph had to have good grammar, spelling and strong vocabulary. After a week or two he choose six kids, and I was happy I was one of them) 

Friday, 9 December 2016

Things I cant live without


In class today we made a wheel with all the things that I cant live without, and this is what I came up with.

movies - it entertains me when Im down or bored.

family - because they've been apart of me since I was born.

food - eating is one of my hobbies when I'm bored I eat when im sad I eat and when i'm hungry I eat.

music - music is a really important part of me because it's like I enter into another dimension it makes me feel free.

friends - my friends are the best things that ever happened to me I don't think I would be who I am now if it wasn't for them.

Friday, 14 October 2016

Chocolate

Image result for chocolateThis chocolate is as smooth as a metal pole holding up the flag, it’s more delicious than a ice cream on a hot summer day. Its scent is as sweet as a baby's smile.

Personification

Friday, 29 July 2016

Letter to Mr Hendricks

Glen Innes School
Glen Innes
26 July 2016


Dear: Mr Hendricks


Mr Hendricks do you ever feel bored when you are forced to play a game you don't like?
Well this is how we the students of Glen Innes school feel like when the teachers organise most of the school events. I strongly believe that you should let us,the year 7 and 8 students be in charge of the mini olympics  for the senior part of the school.


Firstly, think of the classes that will be playing the minigames, the teachers might not know what games they like, so the children won't put as much effort into playing it and they’ll be bored and just want to go back to class, but if we the years 7 and 8 students organise it they won't be so bored because we are still kids and we know what sports kids like to play.


Secondly we all might be put into groups and we can communicate with each other and we might even come up with some great ideas that might surprise you in different ways.  This will be a gold opportunity for us to practice and develop some leadership skills.    


Surely, having the chance to organise this mini olympic would be an amazing chance to have and you might even be amazed by what we can do and come up with.


Yours sincerely

Limi

Friday, 24 June 2016

My short writing about the nervous system


Name: Limi 24 June 2016

My short writing about the nervous system!!

Nervous are placed all over our body that's how we feel physical pain. There are about 100 billion nervous in our body all together it’s known as the nervous system.


There are only 3 organs that help the nervous system the brain, spinal cord and of course the nervous. Say you hit your thumb it will travel through you're nervous to your spinal cord and up to your brain.

Everyone in the world needs the nervous system because if we didn't have our nervous then in our sleep we would suffocate and die. The nervous system plays a very important part in our body

Lungs writing

Name: Limi 24 June 2016

WALT: Lungs

Respiratory system works with the lungs and is taking fresh air in and leaving stale air out.Screenshot 2016-06-23 at 10.55.15 AM.pngImage result for diaphragm and lungs

We have 2 lungs, the left lung is smaller than the right lung.

Our rib cage protects our lungs, but beneath our lungs is the diaphragm a muscle that helps the lungs inhale and exhale, in the shape of a dome.

The outside of the lungs is pink and squish like a sponge.

Bronchioles are smaller than bronchi they are like little branches and there are 30,00 in both lungs.

Alveoli is what is at the end of the bronchiole a special area with teeny tiny air.

There are approximately 600 million Alveoli in our body and if you stretch it out it would cover a whole tennis court.

Friday, 15 April 2016

Lemon cupcake

Name: Limi 12 April 2016


WALT: Lemon cupcake


As my class Rm7 and I walked into the hall we grabbed a table and placed it in front of the stage. Everybody ran to the stage like leopards chasing their prey. “ Bang bang boom boom “ is all I could hear when I jumped on the stage.

After that Mrs Tu'akoi gave all of us cupcake liners and we all had to write our names on the bottom of it. Then Miss Lammas took them and put them in trase.


Then Miss Lammas carefully walked into the hall with all the ingredients in her two hands, she placed it on the table and Mrs Tu’akoi stepped in to take over the lesson. “ Okay open a document and write down these ingredients" One by one she read them out to us, and then she put it all together.

When Mrs Tu'akoi was grating the Rind off the lemon and into the mixture I could smell the lemon it smelt so good. Then Mrs put the batter into the liners and put them in the over for 20min. We walked back to class 30min before Lunch. 20min later the door opens and with cup cakes in Miss Lammas hands.


“Mmmmm” I said , I could smell the delicious lemon and yogurt cupcakes from across the room. I slowly got up and off my seat and walk towards the cup cakes.
The aroma of the cupcakes engulfed my nose with delight and joy, I just couldn't wait to take a bite. “Beep Beep Beeeep Beeeeeep I was about to go off like a bomb if I didn't get my cupcake soon.


“Limi” Mrs Tu'akoi said “ That's me “ I replied, I carefully took my cup cake and ran to my seat. I was jumping up and down up and down with excitement, I just couldn't wait to dig in.
As I lifted this delouise treat towards my mouth I could feel that the cupcake was still hot so that, would probably mean it would be extra deloice.  My first bite took me to the moon, it was so good and it was nice and soft.

I could really taste the lemon and yogurt, but if I had to change anything it would be nothing, because it was perfect just the way it was and, I just wish I had some more!

Jam turn over

Jam Turn over!!!


My mouth filled up with water as the apricot jam , oozed out of the hot pastry and onto my paper towel. My mouth opened wide as my tastes buds were getting ready to fly to the moon. “Crunchhhhhhh” the pastry was as crunchy as toast and the jam was as hot as lava.

“Tick - Tock - Tick - Tock” I was about to go off like a time bomb it was that good, I was in a whole new world and my taste buds were on a whole new level of flavor, my brain turned inside out and my mouth was on fire, It was soooo delicious and so so sooo hot, my stomach just screamed for more.

WORDS OF THE DAY

What my class and I do every morning.


Name: Limi 12 April 2016


Word: considerate


Dictionary meaning - careful not to inconvenience or harm others


Synonyms - generous, mindful


Antonyms -  careless, greedy


Related words - considerately, considerateness


Sentence - he was a very considerate critic.
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Name: Limi 12 April 2016


Word: Critical


Dictionary meaning - expressing adverse or disapproving comments or judgements.


Synonyms - demanding


Antonyms - uncritical


Related words - criticality, criticalness


Sentence - the floodwaters had not receded and the situation was still critical
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Name: Limi 12 April 2016


Word : dispute


Dictionary meaning - a disagreement or an argument


Synonyms - discord,row


Antonyms - calm,agreement


Related words - disputer, disputes


Sentence - It was a terrible dispute between the mother and father.
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Name: Limi 12 April 2016


Word : Establish


Dictionary meaning - set up on a firm or permanent basis


Synonyms - form, install, build


Antonyms - destroy, end , remove


Related words - establishable,establisher


Sentence -I had to establish the doll house all by myself.
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Name: Limi 12 April 2016


Word: Investment


Dictionary meaning - the action or process of investing money for profit.


Synonyms - asset, money


Antonyms - truth, realty


Related words - non reinvestment


Sentence - building a house was a major investment.
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Name: Limi 13 April 2016


Word : empathy


Dictionary meaning - the ability to understand and share the feelings of another


Synonyms - rapport, insight, pity


Antonyms - hatred, indifference


Related words - empathetic


Sentence - Because her parents immigrated to the United States to give her a better life, Maria has empathy for illegal aliens.
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Name: Limi 13 April 2016


Word: Moral


Dictionary meaning - a lesson that can be derived from a story or experience


Synonyms - principled, proper


Antonyms - evil, fake, unjust


Related words - over moral, moral less


Sentence - he learnt a very moral lesson today.
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Name: Limi 13 April 2016


Word : significant


Dictionary meaning - sufficiently great or important to be worthy of attention


Synonyms - important, powerful, symbolic


Antonyms - trivial, unimportant


Related words - significantly, nonsignificant


Sentence - Without any significant proof of his involvement, the man was let off with a stern warning.
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Name: Limi 13 April 2016


Word: reveal


Dictionary meaning - make (previously unknown or secret information) known to others


Synonyms - expose, admit


Antonyms - deny, hide


Related words - reveal ability, revealable ness


Sentence - I had to reveal the rabbit out of the hat in the magic show.


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Name: Limi 13 April 2016


Word: appeal


Dictionary meaning - make a serious, urgent, or heartfelt request


Synonyms -  demand, bid, peal


Antonyms - answer, reply


Related words - appealable, appealability


Sentence - her jokes are quickly losing appeal.


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Name: Limi 14 April 2016


Word : absolutely


Dictionary meaning - with no qualification, restriction, or limitation


Synonyms - totally, definitely


Antonyms - doubtful, uncertain


Sentence - I absolutely love cooking for the family every night.
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Name: Limi 14 April 2016


Word: avoid


Dictionary meaning - keep away from or stop oneself from doing something


Synonyms - bypass, dodge


Antonyms - face, meet, talk


Related words - avoidable, avoider


Sentence - every morning I come to school late to avoid fitness
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Name: Limi 14 April 2016


Word : alternative


Dictionary meaning - (one or more things) available as another possibility or choice


Synonyms - different


Antonyms - same


Related words - alternativeness, alternatively


Sentence -The only alternative to the abandonment of one is the loss of all.________________________________________________________________________


Name: Limi 14 April 2016


Word: apparently


Dictionary meaning - as far as one know or can see


Synonyms - the crack in the wall was


Antonyms - unlikely


Related words - apparent, self- apparent


Sentence - As this viral video shows, your vocal cords can apparently be a weapon


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Name: Limi 14 April 2016


Word: collapse


Dictionary meaning - When someone or something as fallen.


Synonyms -  crash, failure


Antonyms - merical, success, wonder.


Related words - pre collapse, uncollapse


Sentence - He nearly collapsed in the room.
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