Omaru Creek paragraph

Name: Limi 6 April 2017

In class we were learning how to write a paragraph. I based my paragraph on the omaru creek

Omaru creek is getting dirtier and dirtier. Recently a group of men went to the creek to clear the pipes, because it was clogged up with rubbish. Schools had gathered by the stream only to see rubbish floating in the creek. They have also seen the colour of the stream, from water as clear as the sky on a sunny day, to the colour of the sewers in New York city. They have also come in contact with the creek’s dreadful odour, it smells like animals use the creek for its dumping ground. Now when you walk over to see the creek you will see nothing but a polluted stream.

Topic sentence

Detailed sentences

Concluding sentence