Velocity of the creeks water.

One day my class and I, went down to look at the velocity of the water in Omaru Creek.  We made some paper boats, and took it down. We let them sail in the water, and It was really great to see the water flowing and not standing still like the first time we went there.

Omaru creek poem

In class I buddied up with my friend Kuraia and, together we worked on making a song/poem about the Omaru Creek.

Omaru Creek

You should take a little peek

at Omaru Creek

It’s dirty and rotten

and people have forgotten

It’s important to us

but we don’t make a big fuss.

We need to clean the creek and make it healthy again

It’s not too hard, just use your brain

We need your big voice

Just make the right choice

So help us save the Omaru creek

Because it’s special and unique

By: Kuraia and Limi

Omaru creek Animation

Omaru Creek paragraph

Name: Limi 6 April 2017

In class we were learning how to write a paragraph. I based my paragraph on the omaru creek

Omaru creek is getting dirtier and dirtier. Recently a group of men went to the creek to clear the pipes, because it was clogged up with rubbish. Schools had gathered by the stream only to see rubbish floating in the creek. They have also seen the colour of the stream, from water as clear as the sky on a sunny day, to the colour of the sewers in New York city. They have also come in contact with the creek’s dreadful odour, it smells like animals use the creek for its dumping ground. Now when you walk over to see the creek you will see nothing but a polluted stream.

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